Editing/Proofreading

Mindshift Gear

FYI - I haven't listed this page on my main site because it's primarily a place for me to eventually showcase my proofreading/editing chops. I'm convinced that businesses would benefit from better editing and proofreading. The errors are understandable - the online world moves fast! Still, I think they'd benefit from reviewing their online posts occasionally and fixing them if necessary.

Mindshift (Think Tank)

rotation180° Horizon 34L

SKU#: 520215

Whether you are a hiker, birdwatcher or a mountain biker, your momentum is an important part of the experience. Getting to your camera, map, binoculars or GU chomps is a cumbersome process, requiring you to pause to remove the pack and rummage through your belongings. That’s why we developed our unique 180° rotation technology. Simply pull integrated beltpack around your waist for rapid access to your gear.

- I'd add "the" - pull the integrated beltpack